Fate's Apprentice A fair animation.
I will be honest with you: the animation was a bit boring, and i had trouble keeping interest in it. It was choppy, and don't get me wrong, it wasn't necesarily unrealistic, but it just seems like it could be alot more fluent. Work on your technique in terms of the character's movement.
The actual props and background were relativily good. The proportions were there for the most part and that was pleasing to the senses. Everyone has room to improve, and you can find some way to improve your own style.
The sound effects were good. The music was a bit repetitive at first, but for the most part fit in. However, the sound effects and the music togeather were conflicitng. I would suggest for a music video to have no sound effects, and to instead express what the sound is with an image; for instance when the laugh box opened up, you could have laughing smiley faces coming out, or something along the lines of that; be creative.
That, I believe is the most I can suggest for this animation. I did find the storyline a bit confusing, and like I said, you can always improve. I would only say to work on how your writing skills a bit.
Overall, I give this animation a 4/4 and a 7/10. Keep practicing, and keep up the good work!
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